In today’s media lesson, we conducted a marking task. My flat plan was presented to my partner, who then filled out a sheet reflecting her views about it;
From this task
I was able to receive criticism about my work, which would help me improve it
and make it look better. To improve this piece, I will think about what
background may work as I was told that it looked too simple at the moment. I
was also told that there should be a way in which both pages of the double page
spread link and for this, I could perhaps add a microphone in my artists hand from
which the wire could be curving across to the other page linking them together.
The way in which my artist is posing on my double-page spread was said to be
too similar to the front cover and so the microphone idea may help my artist to
pose in a more unique way.
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